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by Rebecca Bentley Feb 4, 2014
Sadness, depression /
on her knees,
she gasps for breath
pleads to be free.
her path is broke,
her home is empty.
she longs, but most don't have to ask,
when her dreams are burdens to there daily tasks.
she longs for interrupted sleep,
to yield ones cries
instead she weeps..
she's dared to dream
she's been deceived by her own body.
standing in the way of herself,
there's no way out, she's cried for help.
some things are just not meant to be
in spite of hope or prayer or dreams.
and even though she finds it hard,
and even though moving on is the hardest part,
she paints a smile on her face,
ready to face another day.
and she will live to chase another dream.but for now I'll wish this weeping women wasn't me..
by Jorge Luis
Very sad..but great...well done
by Dagmar Wilson
Keep on writing. This is such a sad write with lots of emotions. I am truly sorry
by Ingrid de Klerck
She longs for interrupted sleep,
to yield ones cries^^
When I read the above lines, I knew what this is about. If this is about your (unborn) baby, I am truly sorry for your loss.
All the best and God bless,
by Meena Krish
You put on a brave face and am sure the strength within you is stronger then you think. The images are saddening yet the end gives a glimmer of hope. Chin up dear!