Make it Burn

Very important and thought provoking piece at the same time. I loved the topic. It's worth reading.

Like Hannah, I definitely wasn't expecting computer hacking haha! I think it's a very interesting topic to choose to write a poem on, and although I think hacking is often brushed off and ignored unless you are the one actually going through it, and this poem brings to light exactly how much of a problem it can be.

The repetition, to me, is wonderful. "Fingers on a billion tiny triggers" kind of reminded me of the bridge in a song. I like the connotation and comparison this creates with a gun, because, in truth, hacking can ruin someone's life, like a gunshot.

"We can steal you"- another very powerful line with a great impact, really hits home how potentially dangerous hacking can be.

Really great poem, I enjoyed it :)

I heard somewhere, I don't remember where but when a goood hacker( I mean someone who knows the net so well) is caught they might give him a job instead.
I mean there arent many who knows how the cyber world functions.

It's a whole new world, too bad I'm not familiar with it. Binary numbers and other things would be fun to understand.

Great poem, I enjoyed this one more than "another man"

I have no critiques.

I wasn't expecting this piece to be about computer hacking, so I was surprised and definitely intrigued! The computer lingo got me a little confused but overall, I understand the message and think it's a unique and very great one to put into a poem! Props for that.

It is scary, it makes people not really want to buy anything online or bank online because of hackers, it's a serious situation and I'd say millions of people are hacked everyday. Not just money wise either, through social networking sites and other sites, so again I love that you brought this awareness to everyone's attention.

Great write, like I said very unique! Uniqueness is always a great quality when writing because so much stuff has already been done over and over again. Love it! I'm gonna show it to my fiance, he's really good with technology, so I'm sure he'll enjoy this. :)

Interesting piece!!

Probably wouldnt surprise you if I said I'm totally freaked out lol...But no, seriously...awareness on this issue is a good one, and one not talked of often...my mom always tells me things like, dont leave a webcam plugged in, be careful what you put online, shred papers instead of throwing receipts away, etc.....its a scary world...we look over our shoulders worrying about rapers, killers, thieves, but hackers are another "genre" to be on the look out for...its creepy and totally unsafe to have your info out there.

Well done.