So Cold

by WintersAngel   Apr 15, 2013


The light is dim here.
Screams are heard in the distance.
Knives and razors float in the wind.
People take them with no resistance.

It's so cold here.
The river next to you is blood.
Wonders of happiness escape you.
Black rain takes over the flood.

The days are numbered here.
People die because they can.
Everything is done by choice.
A simple twitch of the hand.

It's so scary here.
Nightmares keep you awake.
Overdose is the town beside Bleed Out.
The rain there is pills, more than enough for you to take.

The fear is non existent.
Death is something no one is afraid of.
They know the price for suicide.
They know there's no such thing as love.

It's time to go now.
Death has beckoned you.
You've been here all of 2 days.
And already they knew.

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  • 10 years ago

    by Erick Neal

    Very powerful and deep words. Enjoyed the read.

  • 10 years ago

    by Nick

    This is a great poem! I love how the first four stanzas repeated "here," it gives an interesting new perspective on depression-- that it is more than just emotion, your mind is in an entirely different place. I also like how you used short sentences for each line, it really speaks to the spirit of depression.

  • 10 years ago

    by chloe

    I love the line `Black rain takes over the flood.`So good such a emotionless story but the poem is filled with feeling , love it!

  • 10 years ago

    by Moises Delgado

    Death is nothing more and nothing less we live to die and we die to live born into a world called gods last given gift before he pasted and perished away we are just little people in a giant world trying to live each day as if it was our last we have too look into the future and not look back into our past =) i like your poems they have so much description.

  • 10 years ago

    by Moises Delgado

    Death is nothing more and nothing less we live to die and we die to live born into a world called gods last given gift before he pasted and perished away we are just little people in a giant world trying to live each day as if it was our last we have too look into the future and not look back into our past =) i like your poems they have so much description.

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