Comments : So Cold

  • 4 years ago

    by Kelwin lost in thought

    In the 3rd paragraph or what ever it is in the 2nd line I believe you mean they not the lol Other wise I love it!! 1000/10 very good job.

  • 4 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    Kelwin I think you mean 100/100, lol, but fantastic poem, I truly loved it, it really spoke out in depths to the reader, wonderful poem, you are truly talented beyond words!!!

  • 4 years ago

    by Kelwin lost in thought

    No I mean 1000/10 it's so good

  • 4 years ago

    by Treehugger

    This is good. I love how you decribed weather as death and all the ways you decribed suicide <3

  • 4 years ago

    by crystaljean88

    Wow.. my favorite stanza is

    The fear is non existent.
    Death is something no one is afraid of.
    They know the price for suicide.
    They know there's no such thing as love.

    this is a strong piece and well written. i dont know what to say besides how much i enjoy reading your work, keep it up

  • 4 years ago

    by Moises Delgado

    Death is nothing more and nothing less we live to die and we die to live born into a world called gods last given gift before he pasted and perished away we are just little people in a giant world trying to live each day as if it was our last we have too look into the future and not look back into our past =) i like your poems they have so much description.

  • 4 years ago

    by Moises Delgado

    Death is nothing more and nothing less we live to die and we die to live born into a world called gods last given gift before he pasted and perished away we are just little people in a giant world trying to live each day as if it was our last we have too look into the future and not look back into our past =) i like your poems they have so much description.

  • 4 years ago

    by chloe

    I love the line `Black rain takes over the flood.`So good such a emotionless story but the poem is filled with feeling , love it!

  • 4 years ago

    by Nick

    This is a great poem! I love how the first four stanzas repeated "here," it gives an interesting new perspective on depression-- that it is more than just emotion, your mind is in an entirely different place. I also like how you used short sentences for each line, it really speaks to the spirit of depression.

  • 4 years ago

    by Erick Neal

    Very powerful and deep words. Enjoyed the read.