Comments : Death's Game

  • 4 years ago

    by Treehugger

    Wow, you are right this IS an amazing poem. so many things going on. I do love the first stanza, because she was a girl that was fearless but depression had taken over. Its like your in a journey inside the mind of the writer. I love your perspective of this. I love how you describe depression as death.:) wonderful write my best of yours so far 5/5

  • 4 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    This is such an outstanding poem, wow it blew me away, I love it!

  • 4 years ago

    by Someone Invisible

    ...wow...I've read many poems like this...but this one blew me away...the simple fact that it can be taken as a narrative poem or to speak of depression and pain of a girl who cries on the inside but to the world she's strong...a beautiful write.

  • 4 years ago

    by Kaylee

    I LOVED this poem. It was absolutely amazing. A great piece of art. [=

  • 4 years ago

    by BlueJay

    I love this. There is a lot of strength and heart. Everything is well done. I love the way you made your point and released your pain in a story painted of metaphor so effortlessly. nice job.

  • 4 years ago

    by Ares

    I quite enjoyed the fantasy aspect of this poem :) Great storyline which you portrayed beautifully! Amazing :)

  • 4 years ago

    by Curtis Young

    I like it