Comments : Enter the Deep

  • 4 years ago

    by tainted melody

    This was classic! more like writing used to be in the inspired poems of the past. good job!

  • 4 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Wonderful Work Randy!!!

  • 4 years ago

    by mandy

    Beautifully worded, 5/5

    mandy :)

  • Amazingly written

  • 3 years ago

    by Lofallenve

    Beautiful poem! I can't help but be curious did you mean Veil, when you put Vail?

    Otjerwise, beautifully worded! 5/5

    • 3 years ago

      by Randy East

      Yes, thank you for catching that

  • 2 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    What a wonderful and thoughtful little piece - well done and well written.
    All the best,
    Ben

  • 1 year ago

    by PETER EDWARDS

    What a great piece of writing here Randy! You are indeed a talented poet without question.
    Another write of yours that I will return to again and again.

  • 1 year ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    First of all I have been a fan of your depth for a long time . As poets we have had similar

    I am, that I am... even everywhere,
    I am what I am of course is one translation of what the God of Moses his name is/was and I suppose always will be
    I will be What I will be
    The only constant is change as the laws of nature remain the same
    thus even as our galaxy travels through space the basic laws such as gravity, inertia, and so forth are even everywhere

    "and yet I have a deep."
    Where perfect beads of light prevail
    as infinite children I do keep.
    a deep rather than "the" depth is need not only for the rhyme ,but to denote varying dimensions where perfect beads of light (truth) are and must obey the laws of nature to give the gift of freedom to the children of the (Father God)/Divinity

    Enter the deep of my infinity,
    progress the Veil of time.
    Be one with your own soul mate,
    of which is so sublime.
    To know the joy of Love one must experience the four loves

    As I, in that beginning,
    discovered My Mate too.
    and with a perfect faith and love

    ...beget the likes of you.

    Strong finish in all genres

    I would not have it any other way
    5>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>

  • 1 year ago

    by Daniel Ricks

    Awesome writing. I like the way it causes me to think.