Comments : Mother In Law (acrostic)

  • 4 years ago

    by L

    When Istarted read, lol
    I wish one day, I can have a mother in law like the one described in the acrostic.

    This is not just an acrostic but it also has a rhyme pattern, I thought it added a nice tone to the poem.

  • 4 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Wonderfjul Meena!!!

  • 4 years ago

    by Amreen

    Very genuine and from the heart. You are lucky enough to have her and so does she.
    Hope your love grow more stronger!

    Beautifully penned!

    Keep writing:)

  • 4 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    Let me start off by saying, you are lucky! I can't stand my (future) Mother-In-Law! LOL!

    I do hope you have let her read this, I'm sure she adores it if you have and will cherish it forever!

    One little typo I seen, I think 'Erros' is supposed to be "Errors"

    other than that, perfect acrostic!

    Lovely!

  • 4 years ago

    by Dreamofolwin

    Beautifully written Meena!

  • 4 years ago

    by Khalid

    "Errors small or great she has the heart to forgive" This part is very deep, showing that her forgiveness directly comes from heart.
    "Letters and words to praise are no match for a mother" Whatever we write is never enough compared with what she donates and gives of her endless love and tenderness all to plant that smile on our lips creating happiness.
    Excellent write 5/5

  • 4 years ago

    by TJ Arizona Eagle

    Awesome my dear friend. Loved every word of this

  • 4 years ago

    by L

    Judging Comments Weekly Contest May 20, 2013

    Acrostics can be easy to write though to some they are not. However, what I like about this poem is the simplicity and also the straightforwardness. How often times do we hear people complaining about their mother in law? I mean I heard people making jokes about it, others complaining so much that it surprised me to see this acrostic. And it also gives me hope that who knows perhaps someday I may be bless with a mother in law like the one described in the poem. I also enjoyed the rhymes that were incorporated within this piece. Despite the restriction caused by the rhymes and the acrostic form, the poem successfully delivered a lovely and heartfelt thought about Meena Krish's mother in law.