Comments : Lasting love [ Blackout Poetry ]

  • 4 years ago

    by LittleMermaid

    Beautiful and meaningful! I agree with u dear!

  • 4 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    Thanks so much for entering the challenge, you done really well! :) You did exactly what I was looking for, choosing few words and creating a small, simplistic poem that just stands out from the blackened part!

    You created such a meaningful poem with limited words and made it into something absolutely beautiful. <3

  • 4 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    I must admit, I liked this poem the best from the challenge because I was amazed at the powerful little image it created, and the glimpse of a story it told, with just a few words. I agree with Hannah on this and think this challenge would be great at trying to limit the words to make a short poem.

    You done really well and I love how enjoyable it is to read. Well done.

  • 4 years ago

    by Hellon

    This is an intriguing style and one I haven't come across before. I followed the link but it didn't give me any information on this form. I'd love if you'd pm me with some info on it. Short yes, enjoyable YES!!!

  • 4 years ago

    by zombiepikachu

    This is beautiful -- simple, yet serene. It feels uplifting and quiet, peaceful. It's not a poem that screams out too much -- distracting the true message. Simply beautiful!

  • 4 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Great things come in small packages

    This is awesome

  • 4 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    In just five lines you have given a very true
    statement of love and so very meaningful..very very nicely written!!

  • 4 years ago

    by BlueJay

    For being short and simple you created a great image and full emotional impact. That's definitely a great skill, and you've shown that skill remarkably well. Excellent piece