Thanks so much for entering the challenge, you done really well! :) You did exactly what I was looking for, choosing few words and creating a small, simplistic poem that just stands out from the blackened part!
You created such a meaningful poem with limited words and made it into something absolutely beautiful. <3
I must admit, I liked this poem the best from the challenge because I was amazed at the powerful little image it created, and the glimpse of a story it told, with just a few words. I agree with Hannah on this and think this challenge would be great at trying to limit the words to make a short poem.
You done really well and I love how enjoyable it is to read. Well done.
This is an intriguing style and one I haven't come across before. I followed the link but it didn't give me any information on this form. I'd love if you'd pm me with some info on it. Short yes, enjoyable YES!!!