Mmk see this is why no one will ever be the best nature poet beside you!
Wtf. How do you combine personification like this and still make it elegantly beautiful? Seedling hugs, desert iris's...
my my...you are something else..its like you keep getting better with these poems, you never run out of words for them..
I loved this.
5 years ago
I love the feel of nature's love we all can have. From the flowers to the water. I can imagine you meditating to the water with nature all around you and love in your mind. Your wording brings such peace to my heart and I think thats what you were going for. I love how you hug nature as if it were your own child or something. And the waterfall is amazing as you shower in its grace by listening to its echoes. The river clenses your very soul wiping it clean and you become happy again.
You feel light inside of yourself almost like you are reborn again and it is great feelings to be fully happy. When you say journeyed beyond the midnight in my mind it could mean two things. One meaning could be you took a midnight walk into the woods or a path you love to walk. The more logical meaning could be you were sad until you came into nature and now you are very happy. I love the very last line. You feel so at peace and its a loving caring person. This is such a heartfelt and tranquil write. 5/5.... nominated
5 years ago
by Tara Kay
I'd read this and never really found the words to comment, you just have that way of mesmerizing me, especially with these nature pieces...
I love the words you used..."bask in puffs of seedling hugs"...that was just sooo beautiful...
CONGRATS on the win, and it is a pleasure sharing the front page with you.
Your nature poems will never ever grow old Andrea, they are beautiful even in those few lines! You make a gem out of these words and let the reader see/feel this peace and comfort. Just the image alone of a waterfall is beautiful, so pure... Congrats on the win of course!!