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  • 3 years ago

    by Everlasting

    Edit: I like the melody.

    Meena, continue writing

    just take a deep breathe. I mean whenever I feel sad ( i can't compare the same sadness to how I feel to how you feel but it's worth the try).

    Whenever I feel sad and this ache in my chest doesn't let me be. I write. Sometimes, if I write sad poems, the sadness lingers in me for a while. It's not of much help.

    But if I use that sadness to write a happy and cheerful poem, I find some balance. I guess that's why some of my cheerful poems, I consider the saddest of them all because they were a product of sadness which eventually helped me contra-rest that feeling.

    try to write cheerful poems, or to read cheerful poems... I have the feeling that that may help a little bit. At least a little bit.

    hmm now that I think about it, there aren't that many cheerful or humorous poems in this site. What's wrong with us!

  • 3 years ago

    by Ray Blue

    ~Nicely written Meena. Nice style, this one is really different from your other poems. Like lyrical piece. 5/5!

  • 3 years ago

    by DarkLight

    Always finding a way to add flavor to your writing... nicely done Meena.5/5

  • 3 years ago

    by Dagmar Wilson

    Excellent

  • 3 years ago

    by Amreen

    Sad and heartbreaking write! I can feel your pain and sadness in the poem and the repetition of the verse makes one feel it. Really a nice write!

    Keep writing :)

  • 3 years ago

    by William Mae

    I know this place you speak of... How talented you are.

  • 3 years ago

    by DarkLight

    I love this. the way you've written.....beautiful