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  • 3 years ago

    by Poetic Grunt

    Very good at painting a picture with your words. KUDOS

  • 3 years ago

    by Paul Gondwe

    My best lines of the poem..

    I spent hours memorizing floor plans
    to navigate
    the labyrinth of his soul.

    This was deep and heartfelt, you have a way with your words and are an amazing poet. Thumbs up.

  • 3 years ago

    by Jamparnell

    Awesome picture. 6/5

  • 3 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Judging Comment:

    Reading this poem takes and gives me different
    pictures; yet each one has deep sentiments to
    deal with. I like how the writer has painted a picture
    of a complex and complicated person, one whose
    path is filled with riddles and puzzles for the other
    to know or maybe not able to
    understand. I like the descriptions given in the
    second and third verses for it draws an
    understanding picture of what the author sees.
    An interesting read..very well written.

  • 3 years ago

    by Sarah


  • 6 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Love the creativity in this one...wonderfully detailing the complexity of the human mind.