Comments : Keep me for a night

  • 9 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    I have to say that this is one epic write!

    When I read long poems my mind kinda wanders off a bit from what im reading.....it sure didn't happen here which considering what the piece is about is kinda funny, i literally couldn't stop reading!

    I love the flow and the vocab choice was perfect!

    A great write, if i could nominate this poem then i would because i think it should be highlighted!

    • 9 years ago

      by Bewitched

      Thank You so much.. your appreciation means a lot.

  • 8 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    The highs and lows of a love that takes so much over investment of ones inner self is a damning and addictive spell best broken. A heart touching poem for me

    • 7 years ago

      by Bewitched

      If only the matters of the heart were so easy for us to mold to our liking.
      Thank you for your comment.

  • 7 years ago

    by CJ Maleney

    I don't know what to say to this other than wow, i've been afraid to post some of my more erotic ones, perhaps I may now.

    Thank you so much for writing this