Comments : Cube Of Glass

  • 2 years ago

    by Everlasting

    Very good, the rhymes and a few other things may still need some work but I love what you are doing with your writing. Keep writing. This was a Contemplative write. I like it.

  • 2 years ago

    by La Reina De Corazones

    The story was nice to read, I did think it was forced at times and I really enjoy free verse it's so much more easier to read and to get and to enjoy 4/5

    -Mori