Comments : A Phone Call Away

  • 3 years ago

    by La Reina De Corazones

    Grammar is everybody's friend and in this particular poem in some parts you need to go and put more commas, don't put a capital letter on every line it actually hurts my eyes, ( I know I've done this in the past but I'm changing my poetry), and you should be good.


  • 3 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    No matter how much love has hurt your feelings, the love you feel for the other just lets you forgive again and again. It is that same love that does not want to see the other get hurt knowing one day their fault will backfire.

    Touching yet understanding...