You nailed it!

"for only the weak relies on lies,"
^^
That is so true.

Amazing piece.

Good work; just randomly clicking through - didn't enjoy it as much as other pieces you've done, but still powerful

Amazing! Right on the dot with this poem! You did very well! 10/5 ^_^

*~BrittBratt~*

For a moment, I thought you were writing a sonnet. Abab cdcd efef ..

It has fourteen lines and 7 syllables in each line of the first stanza eventually the syllable count fluctuated a bit. Though if you were trying to write one, it was a good attempt, if not, this could prove that one could write a close sonnet without even trying lol.

I agree, it's not always hard to tell when a man is telling lies, and that actually can hurt depending on how close that man is to us.

This are my favorite lines:

like a burning twig in hell,
you can see it in his eyes.

^ I could picture it.

Keep writing.

Picked at random - great rhythm throughout and interesting topic. Well done.

The heart always knows, oh beautiful one:)

Long time since I read you, Nana. I miss the old days, where you were still Broken Wing and I was the first to come read your work:)

The poem you wrote is sad, but with a calm and determined voice. Lies are always felt, but often ignored on purpose, because we don't want to know...yet.

With every tear we grow wiser and more beautiful, sweetheart;)

Love, Ingrid xx