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by Meena Krish
This here comes out like a manthra for meditation. The relaxation and the peace it evokes is felt. I liked it and I can't help myself by adding more comment to make this even better...sorry!
Here is my version and its just my thoughts...
Take a plunge
deep into (your)
Going (Go) through
of inner darkness,
from The Universe
^^In this end here I feel it could be better with an added word like Awaken soul...Enlightened! Just my thoughts.
All in all I liked the read...Keep penning :)
by alka mendiratta
Thank you so much for enhancing it over all .
Wrote it for 'myself ', with your version it goes for all .
I love this piece, it's something that's so personal, but one that a select few I know will resonate with. You're written it perfectly, and really got me thinking bout my own experiences with consciouness and inner understanding.
Thank you Tim.
Life is all about overcoming our weaknesses and striving to be better human beings.
by Jyoti Rawat
nicely written dear
Thank you dear.
by Ben Pickard
Excellent piece. I love the end.
Thank you Ben :)