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by Mihir Deshmukh Mar 15, 2015
Sadness, depression /
A single silent violin
shimmering on that breezy night.
No silver of your dear moon,
just yellow shimmering candle light.
Candles,champagne and a table for two,
and a million dots on a background blue.
Me wearing the best I have,
me,waiting with an open horse cab.
And you,in that stunning black dress that day,
and you,six feet beneath us you lay.
So I sit there ,sobbing,holding on to your memories shards,
so I sit there sobbing in the candle lit graveyard.
by Mihir Deshmukh
by Ben Pickard
This piece is beautiful and sad all at once. Your language throughout this piece is wonderful.
Well done and all the best,
Thank you sir!
by J Nair
Very Beautifull John.
All the best take care.
It was actually about my girlfriend's death or rather her 1st birthday after she died I actually went there with the candles and violin.