Comments : I Hold On

  • 8 years ago

    by Reddragonfly

    My, this is so sad...But then again, this speaks of the truth. Its such a lonely thought to mull over how love changes if not fade as time goes by. A beautiful, sad write. Thanks for sharing!

    • 8 years ago

      by Timothy

      Thank you for the comment. Although we aren't splitting up, this poem is loosely based on my wife and my relationship.

  • 8 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    Its sad when love runs out. For people forget how it used to be the very first time they found it! Then its all taken for granted and failure to appreciate and feel wanted is no more...touching write.

    • 8 years ago

      by Timothy

      How are you, Meena? As you can see, I don't spend much time on here anymore. Hopefully I can start improving that. Thanks for the reply!