Excellently done. I was always going to like this as I love poems/novels written in old English. I have spent many years of my life obsessed with Shakespeare!
It really isn't easy to do, and most English don't come close, so well done for being brave enough to give it a go, but also for doing it so well.
Wow, Maher, this is such a heart-warming comment. Thank you for appreciating the piece. I love Old English, and I found it perfect to express the feelings I have. Old English has somehow a different tug at heartstrings. :-) One like is more than enough!