Black Hole..

by Haleyy dOss   Nov 14, 2015


Scorned, beaten, betrayed..
Will these feelings ever fade?
I'm in a black hole..
My eyes a different shade...

This heart of mine feels so tight...
It's like I can't breathe..
Everything just isn't right..
I wish that I could leave..

Smiles slowly disappear..
Could this really be true?
I wish that it would reappear..
the way that it used too..

But time passes by..
And I begin to see..
That all these hard feelings..
is how it's meant to be..

1


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 1 year ago

    by Augustus Black

    This is written very fantastically. This kind of sad poem creates great value. The stream and the wording here is quite good actually.

    Keep on showing your skills. 5/5

  • 1 year ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Hello Haleyy and welcome to pnq

    This really is a sad piece but it is well written and has a nice flow to it. It deals with a feeling that many can relate to as well, which is always a great start for any sort of literature!
    All the very best ad keep writing,
    Ben