This is written very fantastically. This kind of sad poem creates great value. The stream and the wording here is quite good actually.
Keep on showing your skills. 5/5
2 years ago
by Ben Pickard
Hello Haleyy and welcome to pnq
This really is a sad piece but it is well written and has a nice flow to it. It deals with a feeling that many can relate to as well, which is always a great start for any sort of literature!
All the very best ad keep writing,