I am, and they are forevermore strong. (You are weak)

by Haleyy dOss   Nov 17, 2015


Something so weightless, I never thought that I could carry.
I always recreate this, I'm scared, but right now it's not so scary.

It's beating so loud, my shoulder unattached from the weight of this heavy feeling.
How is this even allowed, shouldn't I already of been slowly healing.

An infinite amount of days, but some things you can't seem to leave behind.
An infinite amount of ways, but the right way you can never find.

I always feel misplaced, it feels like it's missing but it's really still there.
Something I would've faced, the removal, the incision, and the tear.

I feel so crippled, never again will I ever be the same.
My lack of trust has sadly tripled, and I hate to admit but you're to blame.

Ironically I'm disgusted, because at first you were the best taste.
I can't believe I even trusted, a person who was a waste.

You ruined my happiness, and you ripped out my glowing heart.
I'll always live with this, the weight that's been tearing me apart.

I look to the right, my heart still would've st my sleeve.
I always wake to this sight, and I'll never be able to find myself to truly believe.

I fear for your next choice, I don't want you to hurt them like you did me.
I fear when they hear your voice, the real person they won't even see.

I hate the thought of them to start off thinking that they can even trust you, because one thing I know is that your impression is just a clever well made out plan, anyone to believe go by it, doesn't know how to identify a real man.
I love the fact that I found out who you really were and what you would really actually do, they'll learn on their own, maybe faster than I did, and follow each worn out placed clue.

Soon everyone will have heard, that you were never what they thought, never in a million years.
You may have filled me with every word, but I I won't ever again waste my tears.

My hearts on my sleeve for good, because you misplaced it from where it belong.
I'll carry this weight like I should, because I'm no longer weak, I'm forevermore strong.

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  • 1 year ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    By Haleyy dOss

    " Something so weightless, I never thought that I could carry.
    I always recreate this, I'm scared, but right now it's not so scary."
    Seems you found security in a weightless spirit

    "It's beating so loud, my shoulder unattached from the weight of this heavy feeling.
    How is this even allowed, shouldn't I already of been slowly healing."
    Yes even if a higher power is perceived as the ego how is a burden so great allowed?
    Only a suggestion shouldn't I already "have" been slowly healing."
    Using of in place of have is a very common error in grammar

    " An infinite amount of days, but some things you can't seem to leave behind.
    An infinite amount of ways, but the right way you can never find."
    I do believe the ways to deal with negative circumstances or emotion seem infinite

    "I always feel misplaced, it feels like it's missing but it's really still there.
    Something I would've faced, the removal, the incision, and the tear."
    Message of relief coming from letting go

    "I feel so crippled, never again will I ever be the same.
    My lack of trust has sadly tripled, and I hate to admit but you're to blame."
    Very wise to find a cause of undesired effects

    "Ironically I'm disgusted, because at first you were the best taste.
    I can't believe I even trusted, a person who was a waste."
    I can relate to this "what was I thinking" moment

    "You ruined my happiness, and you ripped out my glowing heart.
    I'll always live with this, the weight that's been tearing me apart."

    Descriptive imagery of a broken heart again

    "I look to the right, my heart still would've st my sleeve.
    I always wake to this sight, and I'll never be able to find myself to truly believe."
    Not sure what the st means

    I fear for your next choice, I don't want you to hurt them like you did me.
    I fear when they hear your voice, the real person they won't even see.

    I hate the thought of them to start off thinking that they can even trust you, because one thing I know is that your impression is just a clever well made out plan, anyone to believe go by it, doesn't know how to identify a real man.
    I love the fact that I found out who you really were and what you would really actually do, they'll learn on their own, maybe faster than I did, and follow each worn out placed clue.

    Soon everyone will have heard, that you were never what they thought, never in a million years.
    You may have filled me with every word, but I I won't ever again waste my tears.

    My hearts on my sleeve for good, because you misplaced it from where it belong.
    I'll carry this weight like I should, because I'm no longer weak, I'm forevermore strong.

    Strong finish

    • 1 year ago

      by Haleyy dOss

      I love that you care & give feedback (: