Comments : Ode to My Moon

  • 1 year ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    In love <3!

  • 1 year ago

    by Meena Krish

    I like nature poems and I always look for rhythm, rhymes and/or flow. I must say that this one flowed smoothly without breaking the reader's thoughts and it draws a picture of love.

    The moon is like a king one who sits up high and can only be admired not touched. Honestly I kept reading and re-reading to see if there was an abrupt stop in the wording of the poem and found none. A lovely read in fact its enchanting!

  • 1 year ago

    by Cindy

    Andrea this is really beautiful.
    Take care Cindy
    *hugs

  • 1 year ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Hello,
    this is delcious. The way you portray the moon as a constant, reliable friend. The one who loves unconditionally. We all need that special someone don't we?

    My favourite part: when you held my hand by the river.
    ^
    I can see the reflection. Just the sight fueled the will power.

    Also, the word 'twiggy' - loved it!!

    A splendid piece of writing.

    Take care,

    Michael