Comments : Narration

  • 2 years ago

    by Everlasting

    Ha! Aside from the format ... And how it looks, this was a pleasure to read.

  • 2 years ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Very clever and wonderful to read. Really very enjoyable to read

  • 2 years ago

    by Brenda

    I really like how you wrote this, it had a neat flow. Really good write.

  • 2 years ago

    by Em

    This is different to the usual love story poem etc but excellent. I like what you did and how you had a bit of a twisted sense of humour. I am a non believer so it's something I'd do lol well written

  • 1 year ago

    by mossgirl19

    Creative write!