Comments : The Eve of My Dreams

  • 7 years ago

    by Rania Moallem

    What an imagenation that you have in the back of your mind !
    this must be one of the most descriptive deep poems ive read since i came back here lol....

    The ugly snake would have me fear beauty, as if it could rob me like a thief,
    But it was the beautiful Eve, who taught me the beauty of sweet relief
    Because she had learned through her pain, that our relief comes from our belief
    I believe every hair is numbered like every trembling leaf

    this is just waaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaoooooow..seriously ur so gd as i remember u well done
    5/5

  • 7 years ago

    by H. Elizabeth

    Wow...this is really, REALLY good. I love the rhyming and the rhythm. I enjoyed it very, VERY, much! =)
    Keep up the amazing work!

    --Hannah

  • 7 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Thank you so much for the comment on Eve of my Dreams it was inspired by a very real woman

  • 6 years ago

    by XxFallenxFromxGracexX

    Interesting poem, i like the way its set as a story, it flows really well and is enjoyable to read
    well done!

  • 2 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Wow, this is beautiful! I love how you wonderfully weaved the story to point at our Savior. Great work!