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by shadow Jul 2, 2016
Sadness, depression /
Like honest confessions from a compulsive liar
I set fires while dancing in the rain
Just hold your breath and jump right in
While I whisper secrets of the insane
Watch the world spin out of control
Can you smell the electricity in the air
Anger sizzles just below the thin surface
I'm a slave to its intoxicating stare
Yes I think you have communicated the insane state effectively. :-) Well done!
Oooh, I really liked this! A lot of energy bouncing off this. Right from the first line you reeled me in and a felt the insanity-good job!
Thank you :)