Comments : Still ...

  • 1 year ago

    by Maple Tree

    Excellent!

  • 1 year ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    A beautiful poem, a beautiful life, and cheers to there always being something more! Eloquently written, wonderfully designed... you are a sculptor as well as a poet!

    5/5
    IdTakeABulletForYou

  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    WOW! This is amazing! That's all I got...

  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    Larry, congratulations on your win, I'm still speechless over this-well done!

  • 1 year ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    This is amazing

  • 1 year ago

    by Meena Krish

    First off you did such a great work at this shape poetry and if I'm not mistaken it looks like a torch..an Olympic torch..maybe am wrong but the design stands out like that.

    The very poem itself reads mystically taking the reader back to the Greek ages which makes me come to a conclusion of the Olympic theme. The beginning of the first 3 stanzas shows the players involved in certain sports and how their strength and onset of mind is pushing them to get to through a certain event.

    Then again I might be completely off with this but it has all that ingredients, adventure and that determination of getting through to reach and be the best...

    Yet, something
    there is, still;
    something
    ... ... ...
    more

    ^^Yes there is always something more, and to go further. Congrats on the Win!

  • 1 year ago

    by Maple Tree

    Judging Comment

    Mystical, elegant, stylish and unique!

    This comment is small but those 4 words sum up this poem to a tee!

    Larry has detailed a truly elegant nature piece, at its finest!!