Love the way you personified one word - darkness - into so much more. Interesting that you referred to it as a "she"...

You layer this poem like a cake, and it tastes delectable to my emotions! Not too rough, but not too soft; reality, in all its bitterness, in dealing with the darkness within ourselves.

I can tell your battle has been well-worthwhile and that you are winning. I hope you see this yourself.

Wonderful write.
5/5
IdTakeABulletForYou

Well put.

Wow! Very powerful write! I absolutely love the way you described why you fear the darkness. Well done!

Excellently written.
Em

Amazing poem. I relate to this very much. This is one of my favorite poems I have read on here. Great job.

Me too

Sometimes it's the the things we love the most that hurt us the most.. and those types of relationships usually end in both of the parties being hurt.

Liked this very much