Comments : The 13 Imitations of Darkness

  • 2 years ago

    by shadow

    Love the way you personified one word - darkness - into so much more. Interesting that you referred to it as a "she"...

  • 2 years ago

    by IdTakeABulletForYou

    You layer this poem like a cake, and it tastes delectable to my emotions! Not too rough, but not too soft; reality, in all its bitterness, in dealing with the darkness within ourselves.

    I can tell your battle has been well-worthwhile and that you are winning. I hope you see this yourself.

    Wonderful write.
    5/5
    IdTakeABulletForYou

  • 2 years ago

    by DarkLight

    Well put.

  • 2 years ago

    by Brenda

    Wow! Very powerful write! I absolutely love the way you described why you fear the darkness. Well done!

  • 2 years ago

    by Em

    Excellently written.
    Em

  • 2 years ago

    by Ciara

    Amazing poem. I relate to this very much. This is one of my favorite poems I have read on here. Great job.

  • 2 years ago

    by Everlasting

    Me too

  • 1 year ago

    by Beautiful Tragedy

    Sometimes it's the the things we love the most that hurt us the most.. and those types of relationships usually end in both of the parties being hurt.

  • 1 year ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Liked this very much