Drain your words of their nectar,
And fill up my cup once more.
Quench my thirst for your sweet embrace,
Nourish my very core.
The rhyming scheme is unique and beautifully done in this first stanza. The way you captured the embrace of words as nectar for your soul is truly imaginary way of thinking, but I love it! Longing for that embrace, the I love you's, the I miss you's.. Oh how I can relate to this stanza in great lengths.
Stoke the fire you've lit in my heart,
So it may keep us warm at night.
Then feed your fears to the flames, my love
And together we'll be alright.
Power radiates throughout this stanza, the comfort of your love and tenderness can surmount the fears. The way you are able to pour your emotions and feelings so freely on paper (internet) is truly a gift.
1 year ago
This is beautiful but so sad. Wanting that person so much that it hurts.