What a beautiful and original dedication, Gel.
The way you have broken down your love for this person into academic subjects is quirky and wonderful all at once.
If the subject of this piece really is better than those four names at the bottom, they must be one hell of a person!
First off: the title. Wonderfully intriguing. Secondly, I thought the layout was witty and fun. And thirdly, I was very pleased to see such interesting choices in wording. I find so many people re-use the same old words, but here it looks like you've tried to break free from that.
P.S. Please comment and vote honestly on every piece you read.
thanks for the comment.
and yes, if I like what I read, I drop down a comment or suggestion. But if I don't like,I rather not quote the piece. I don't want to hurt someone's feeling.
Thank you so much for reminding me
have a bless day. :)
1 year ago
This is an interesting twist on the idea of relating love to education, I don't know why that's so popular but I've seen it quite a bit since joining here. The breaking up of the piece into subject matters is interesting and reminds me of setting up a shared binder in school for all your subjects - so that was a cool use of style. The voice comes out clearly and the authors admiration for this person is powerful. The word choice is interesting and works well here because each section includes vernacular devoted to each specific subject as well as the perspective of the author towards each of these themes. This was a breath of fresh air and very well put together.
Thank you all for the comments and most especially to the judges. ...my heart filled with happiness right now knowing that many appreciates my works. .. And for that my hands and thought wanna do more crave for more and want to make more. ... Thank you so much guys