Comments : Broken and confused

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    A fantastic write.
    I don't ever think depression will be gone completely but that we learn to live with it and deal with it better and head on.

    All the best, Em

    • 1 year ago

      by vincent art

      Glad you like em, few errors but its a start.. Yeah best way to live with depression is to acknowledge it and ofcourse acceptance, that things will never go back the way we like them to.

  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    Vincent, hi, so nice to see a write from you. I really liked this a lot. It's sad but written beautifully. Depression is a rough road to travel but you are working through it. Well done-Brenda

  • 1 year ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Excellent write. One i can realate too.. well done :) if you want someone to talk too..

    I know how nothing helps.. no amount of booze no amount of smiling or anything

  • 1 year ago

    by Everlasting

    Me likes the rhymes and the poem overall.

  • 4 months ago

    by Euphanasia

    When pain hurts so bad inside. This poetry is all we have to turn to. Such sadness yet such honest beauty in this poem.

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