Can't Stand

by Lisa   Jul 8, 2004


I can't stand the way you look at me
Like you think it's all a dream
I can't stand the way you talk to me
I'm not the person that I seem

I can't stand the way you touch me
Like I'm an angel from above
I can't stand the way you rub me
Like I'm fragile, full of love

I can't stand the way you treat me
Like I'm the princess of more than land
I can't stand the way you treat me
You'll always hold my hand

I can't stand the way you smile at me
Like I really make you that happy
I can't stand the way you laugh with me
Like my jokes aren't even sappy

I can't stand the way you promise me
Things you think you'll keep
I can't stand the fact I believe you
You're telling the truth, I can't weep

I can't stand the way you love me
Like I were meant for you
I can't stand the way I know your heart
Will always be mine and true

I can't stand the fact that you're perfect
And I will never be
Although when I look in your eyes
Me being perfect is all I ever see

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  • 16 years ago

    by On Cupids Bad Side

    I LOVED this poem. its so great. i think it's important for readers to be able to relate to your poems, and this one definantly got to me : ) great job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    I am so glad now, you are back to keep writing, you are a very talented poet,
    amazing job 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by crystal

    i really like this poem. i like your use of repitition and the way it flows so well. great job. keep it up
    crystal

  • 18 years ago

    by Shy

    oh lord this describes the way my friends say i think perfectly
    5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Kayla

    wow good poem...no no awesome poem..lol...no one is perfect though lol but yes i know what you mean...hehe...anyways 5/5 good job..luv yas mwah...plz comment on my poems!!!

    -kayla-

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