Comments : Can't Stand

  • 13 years ago

    by Marie

    Good poem but in the 6th stanza 2nd line i think u should put was instead of were... Just and idea. Other than that i think this is a great write! Keep it up!

  • 13 years ago

    by Andrea

    wow...brilliant!!

  • 12 years ago

    by Daniel Goding

    wow, great poem, it all came together so nicely

  • 12 years ago

    by Brookeღ

    Exellent job on ur poem! Shows true feelings I like that. Check out some of mine if u would Thanx and Take Care!

  • 12 years ago

    by *Sherrie*

    I like this, but to be honest it was nothing special... but I can see that you are talented...
    Xox Sherrie

  • 12 years ago

    by hussain

    wow awesome poem i loved it. yes u r very talent and i liked the style to it. Keep it up.

  • 12 years ago

    by Kristin

    Wow! I really liked this poem ALOT! Keep up the great work! 5!

  • 12 years ago

    by fallen angel

    i loved the poem. it was full of truth. i can relate to the poem aswell. keep writing. xxx

  • 12 years ago

    by NannO

    awwwwwwwww.... that was so cute!! its so adorable and ur rhyme made it even better!!.. the flow was wonderful.. i love ur last stanza..
    keep writin hun
    thnx 4 da comment
    nouna

  • 12 years ago

    by Kayla

    wow good poem...no no awesome poem..lol...no one is perfect though lol but yes i know what you mean...hehe...anyways 5/5 good job..luv yas mwah...plz comment on my poems!!!

    -kayla-

  • 12 years ago

    by Shy

    oh lord this describes the way my friends say i think perfectly
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by crystal

    i really like this poem. i like your use of repitition and the way it flows so well. great job. keep it up
    crystal

  • 11 years ago

    by Goran Rahim

    I am so glad now, you are back to keep writing, you are a very talented poet,
    amazing job 5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by On Cupids Bad Side

    I LOVED this poem. its so great. i think it's important for readers to be able to relate to your poems, and this one definantly got to me : ) great job.