Comments : Lips (Acrostic)

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    That's so sweet Michael. It may be simple but it's elegant.

    All the best.

    • 1 year ago

      by - Mr. Darcy

      Thank you Em.

      Have a great day. X

  • 1 year ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Very good, this, Michael.
    Acrostics are never easy when done well and the shorter they get, the harder they are. Not only do you have to stick to the subject, but you need to make sure it's still poetic and cram in whatever imagery you can. You've managed that effortlessly here.
    (This is where you pm me and tell me it took hours!)

    All the best,

    Ben

  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    Very nice Michael. You are such a love bug type of man. Just lovely-

  • 1 year ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Wow this cute Sir Michael

  • 1 year ago

    by Mayday

    ^_^ Well, this was enough to make me blush anyway. (lol) Lovely little sensual/sweet...rather romantic poem, Mr. Darcy :3 I love it.

    5/5

    • 1 year ago

      by - Mr. Darcy

      I'd like to think the reader can interpret it two ways. It's obvious which path you took. Lol

      Glad you liked it. *excuse the pun*

  • 1 year ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    Going backwards from trup to this.. well done. Efortless seamless well done.

  • 11 months ago

    by stormingdance (Jessica)

    Captivating!