Meena,

What a beautifully written piece of poetry this is.

I hope you are keeping well,

Ben

Hey means,

Everytime I read something new from you its always better than the last, love how you layer this out and totally agree with Ben, this is beautifully written.

Other Ben :)

As always this is fantastic.

This is exquisite, raw and very powerful.

Love it

Craig

there are no rhythm or rhyme in this piece only poetry.

Oh this is absolutely gorgeous!

"when you
soaked yourself into my lips
leaving a memory…"

Just beautiful! Well done!

Meena, congratulations on your front page win! This is just beautiful! Well done-

Wow !!!! Congratulations Meena on the win .Beautiful write and sensational too .

Congrats on the win! :)

Wow Sis, just wanted to let you know that you never disappoint, simple & yet so elegant. Congrats on your win...well deserved :)

all the best and take care...

Congratulations for the win Meena :)

NICE MEENA

Judging comment

A strong raw poem full of emotion. Great word usage and well-paced. The poem flows well and gathers strength as it carries you along, culminating in a lovely finish which for me is the strongest stanza. I must admit to being distracted by the use of “because’ between the first two stanza’s which isn’t really necessary I think, but it’s a minor criticism in an otherwise great poem.