Comments : Evening Fury

  • 6 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Meena,

    What a beautifully written piece of poetry this is.

    I hope you are keeping well,

    Ben

  • 6 months ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Hey means,

    Everytime I read something new from you its always better than the last, love how you layer this out and totally agree with Ben, this is beautifully written.

    Other Ben :)

  • 6 months ago

    by Em

    As always this is fantastic.

  • 6 months ago

    by CJ Maleney

    This is exquisite, raw and very powerful.

    Love it

    Craig

  • 6 months ago

    by ddavidd

    there are no rhythm or rhyme in this piece only poetry.

  • 6 months ago

    by Ren

    Oh this is absolutely gorgeous!

    "when you
    soaked yourself into my lips
    leaving a memory…"

    Just beautiful! Well done!

  • 6 months ago

    by Brenda

    Meena, congratulations on your front page win! This is just beautiful! Well done-

  • 6 months ago

    by alka mendiratta

    Wow !!!! Congratulations Meena on the win .Beautiful write and sensational too .

  • 6 months ago

    by Ren

    Congrats on the win! :)

  • 6 months ago

    by End Of Eternity

    Wow Sis, just wanted to let you know that you never disappoint, simple & yet so elegant. Congrats on your win...well deserved :)

    all the best and take care...

  • 6 months ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Congratulations for the win Meena :)

  • 6 months ago

    by Jyoti Rawat

    NICE MEENA

  • 3 months ago

    by Nicko

    Judging comment

    A strong raw poem full of emotion. Great word usage and well-paced. The poem flows well and gathers strength as it carries you along, culminating in a lovely finish which for me is the strongest stanza. I must admit to being distracted by the use of “because’ between the first two stanza’s which isn’t really necessary I think, but it’s a minor criticism in an otherwise great poem.