Comments : Flying With Venus

  • 6 months ago

    by Michael

    Great write Larry, really enjoyed reading this

    Michael

  • 6 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Larry,

    The imagery coupled with the warm intensity of this beautiful poem makes this a pleasure to read.
    Those last two lines sum a relationship worth having up perfectly. Nothing is too much to bear if we have someone we feel like this about to greet us at the end of the day.
    I hope this is nominated; I'm out!

    Take care

  • 6 months ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Simply wonderful

    Regards

    Craig

  • 6 months ago

    by Ren

    The imagery in this poem is absolutely wonderful! Such a beautiful piece filled with love. Amazing job :)

  • 6 months ago

    by Golden AnGel Rhapsodist

    Sir Larry,
    1st , the title blew me away already. ..
    2nd , the visual you display on this poem really rocks. .. I love the imaginary. ..good to know u keep you marriage intact. ..

    Great job. .

  • 6 months ago

    by Ren

    Congratulations on the win! :)

  • 6 months ago

    by Larry Chamberlin

    Thank you to you all for your kind comments. The most endearing comment was a kiss, which came from my wife when I read it to her on the evening after I wrote it.

  • 6 months ago

    by Brenda

    Larry, congratulations on your win! Well deserving front page write. This is just lovely! It shows how much you and your loved one are meant for each other. Well done -

  • 3 months ago

    by BlueJay

    Judging Comment:

    The imagery in this piece is so amazing, it feels like story told through a painting. The rhythm is smooth like paint on a canvass and the vivid images are just the right thing to really make this piece pop. Length and style were both spot on here too and the title was so phenomenal that I kept playing around with it in my head wondering what exactly it would mean to the author. Great piece, very well written.

  • 3 months ago

    by Nicko

    Judging comment

    The message is clear and simple yet deeply personal at the same time. A poem that many have shared and can relate to I think, the zest of longing and excitement when we rush to meet our loved ones. Well executed and so easy to see the love shining through. The imagery had me sitting in that car off to the airport!