Comments : Silent and Crowded Sanctuary

  • 6 months ago

    by CJ Maleney

    "From A to Z we fill the cage"

    but things squeeze through the bars.

    Amazing as always

    Craig

  • 6 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A well written and well rhymed poem, Meena; cleverly done. I like your use of half rhymes.

    Take care,

    Ben

  • 6 months ago

    by ddavidd

    Very interesting insight and easy to read. Well penned dear Meena.

  • 3 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    What an insightful read, Meena. Took me to some silent sanctuary. This is beautiful.

  • 3 months ago

    by Sai

    I enjoy reading poems like this. Very clever! How you suggest an image to the reader right at the beginning, with the title. I was thinking of a mosque/church/some other holy place, and then slowly comes the switch at the end.

  • 2 months ago

    by Sampreeth kotian

    Hi Meena.... Silent, killer poem...you nailed it !