Comments : Long Cool Woman (In a Black Dress)

  • 5 months ago

    by Pagan Paul

    I think we have all met women like her :) attention seekers.
    I find if you ignore them it drives them mad.
    Nicely penned Larry.
    PPx

  • 5 months ago

    by Brenda

    Larry, I really liked this a lot-you totally nailed the song-

  • 5 months ago

    by Michael

    Hi Larry

    Fab write chap. Thoroughly enjoyed the read

    Michael

  • 5 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Really liked this Larry. I dont know the original song but i like the story and imagery woven through it x

  • 5 months ago

    by Meena Krish

    You should have entered this Larry its just fantastic!! But you know throughout
    this read I could only see that wine/whisky bottle dressed in black. That same seductive
    way when a man drinks this is just like when a woman of the same image walks in and
    captures all those men! Maybe I'm wrong but that is what I saw...you took that seductive
    drink and turned it into a woman!

  • 5 months ago

    by Ren

    Gosh this is such a gorgeous piece!! So well written and full of amazing imagery! Excellent write!!