Comments : The world will not wait

  • 1 year ago

    by CJ Maleney

    A rather old random one which I happen to like

  • 1 year ago

    by Lvi

    This reminds me " The world does not owe you anything. "

    I really adore the message as well as your poem. :)

    There are so many creative lines and phrases that I just cannot pick my favorite one.

    • 1 year ago

      by CJ Maleney

      I've not read that if you can find a link I would like to to read it.

      My theory is you only have 2 choices jump on or jump off

      Regards

      Craig

    • 1 year ago

      by Lvi

      “Don’t go around saying the world owes you a living. The world owes you nothing. It was
      here first.”--------This is the exact quote , by Mark Twain

  • 1 year ago

    by tobias kinti

    Enjoyed this

    • 1 year ago

      by CJ Maleney

      Smiles at this, as it is a bit random and all over the place.

      That someone enjoyed it is pretty special

      Craig

  • 1 year ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Love this write, I like how as you say it's "all over the place"

    Dude you write freakin awesome poetry.

    N0minated.

  • 1 year ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Glad you like dude and thanks for the nom

    Regards

    Craig

  • 1 year ago

    by Lyical Madness

    Time & time again...just amazing x

    • 1 year ago

      by mossgirl19

      I will have to echo LM's words...time and time again...how do you even do it? It's flawless and hits straight to the bones.

  • 1 year ago

    by Ren

    "Either for good or bad, you will be remembered by someone.
    Make sure it's for the right reasons."

    Those last few lines, BAM!

    An extremely powerful write, Craig!! Fantastic work!! I've really enjoyed your poetry this week!!

  • 1 year ago

    by Brenda

    Craig, so very true. Life travels at the speed of light and as you get older it gets even faster. Make it count, stop being with and around people that don't have your best interest in. Do something you are passionate about and makes your soul happy. Well done-

  • 1 year ago

    by Fredy

    So many great lines throughout this piece!

    "So the world will turn and it will forget you as sure as it forgets yesterdays storm."

    You speak only truths in this piece! What a great job!

  • 1 year ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Thank you all for your comments on this one. Sorry I can't reply to you all individually, very busy bank holiday weekend, so much for time off lol!

    Normal service resumes tomorrow

    Craig