Comments : How To Win A War (gods Collide)

  • 8 months ago

    by CJ Maleney

    I had a different title in mind for this but I didn't want to make it too obvious

  • 7 months ago

    by Lyical Madness

    Beautiful Craig x

  • 7 months ago

    by Meena Krish

    I had a feeling it was her..only the Goddess of love is bold
    and defiant! Wish there were more like her in reality who can match
    up to a man and bring him down :) just my thought.

    Sorry I keep doing this, but the first line: He sits upon his thrown,
    there is a typo - throne

    all in all I liked the read and one more thing, this line:
    "My Lord it's aphrodite"
    Why capitalize My Lord and not capitalize Aphrodite..? Are you trying to make
    a point or can I start a small argument about it :)

    Keep penning!

    • 7 months ago

      by CJ Maleney

      I may have been a bit tipsy when I wrote it I shall ammend accordingly lol,

      Thank you for the heads up

  • 7 months ago

    by Phil

    Fantastic work