Comments : Thirty Hills (song)

  • 3 months ago

    by Em

    Maher, I'm not sure if you've changed/added anything to this and I'm too lazy to look but it seems alot more well let's say thrilling and chilling than what i remember but still beautifully done and not certainly welcome rhymed. I still stand by comment I sent you and no matter how many times I read this I still can't seem to figure out the underlining story or whatever but it's told really and gave me goosebumps and moved me (no I don't mean off my arse lol) and none many people can move me because I'm made of tough stuff haha.
    I have a huge smile on my face that you decided to post it and though I know you're not much for the nominations etc I truly wish this is as it deserves a front page viewing so I'm gutted I can't nominate and once again thanks for trusting me to be honest when you sent it to me.

    Fantastical as always.
    Em x

    • 3 months ago

      by Maher

      Thanks Em. I did change it a little and added some verses. I'm sure there's other meanings that can be pulled from it :). A smile trumps a nomination any day! And I have you and Naomi to thank for convincing me to post it, so thank you both :) and don't be gutted, I waited till I saw all the familiar people had already used up their nominations before I posted this :p

    • 3 months ago

      by Em

      You little sneak!!! Lol

  • 3 months ago

    by Brenda

    Maher, this is amazing! This story was unfolding and part of me was saying look away but I couldn't. Totally engrossing write. Love this!

    • 3 months ago

      by Maher

      Thanks Brenda, glad you enjoyed it :)

  • 3 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Loved this. An amazing piece with great rhythm and rhymes. Superb imagery. Definitely worthy of nomination

    • 3 months ago

      by Maher

      Thanks Milly, glad you enjoyed it :)

  • 3 months ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    AWW SC - You posted it! Its changed a little, but still.. Im so glad!
    I am glad its been nominated! Its worthy of it!!

    I still loved reading it - even thought i did get a sneak peak.

    Well done! and PS. I told you so (you know to what!).... :P

    • 3 months ago

      by Maher

      Lol ty USB. Yes, you did tell me so indeed :p

  • 3 months ago

    by Hope

    Loved reading this!

    • 3 months ago

      by Maher

      Thanks :)