Maher, I'm not sure if you've changed/added anything to this and I'm too lazy to look but it seems alot more well let's say thrilling and chilling than what i remember but still beautifully done and not certainly welcome rhymed. I still stand by comment I sent you and no matter how many times I read this I still can't seem to figure out the underlining story or whatever but it's told really and gave me goosebumps and moved me (no I don't mean off my arse lol) and none many people can move me because I'm made of tough stuff haha.
I have a huge smile on my face that you decided to post it and though I know you're not much for the nominations etc I truly wish this is as it deserves a front page viewing so I'm gutted I can't nominate and once again thanks for trusting me to be honest when you sent it to me.
Thanks Em. I did change it a little and added some verses. I'm sure there's other meanings that can be pulled from it :). A smile trumps a nomination any day! And I have you and Naomi to thank for convincing me to post it, so thank you both :) and don't be gutted, I waited till I saw all the familiar people had already used up their nominations before I posted this :p