senryu #1

by k.won   Jun 27, 2017


the heart of this world
always gives another chance
to who deserves it.

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  • 5 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    A great little senryu with a nice touch of wisdom sprinkled over the top.

    Well written,

    Ben

    • 5 months ago

      by k.won

      thank you

  • 5 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    This is captivating and heart-touching, Aisha.

    • 5 months ago

      by k.won

      thanks mel

  • 5 months ago

    by k.won

    thanks moss girl.i went and correct this one

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