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by Ben Pickard
This may be an 'early years' poem, Craig, but your way with a good rhyme is obvious here. I like this a lot and particularly the last stanza.
All the best,
by Lyical Madness
Absolutely beautifully written. Well done :) x
Awww...I thought of the movie Dear John while reading this...when you are in a very difficult place love can surely inspire you to continue on. Lovely write and as Ben said, early years poem but your great rhyming is already evident.
by CJ Maleney
Thanks guys, think I was 24 when I wrote this, hidden away for 21 years.
What I'm struggling with is titles and not one of the my early rhymes has a tittle.
Nice one fella,
A lovely flowing rhythm, and nice to read
by Meena Krish
Nicely penned with a timed rhythm and rhyme...sweet :)