Comments : Dream Me Home (early years poem)

  • 2 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    This may be an 'early years' poem, Craig, but your way with a good rhyme is obvious here. I like this a lot and particularly the last stanza.
    All the best,
    Ben

  • 2 months ago

    by Lyical Madness

    Absolutely beautifully written. Well done :) x

  • 2 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Awww...I thought of the movie Dear John while reading this...when you are in a very difficult place love can surely inspire you to continue on. Lovely write and as Ben said, early years poem but your great rhyming is already evident.

  • 2 months ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Thanks guys, think I was 24 when I wrote this, hidden away for 21 years.

    What I'm struggling with is titles and not one of the my early rhymes has a tittle.

    Craig

  • 2 months ago

    by Michael

    Nice one fella,

    A lovely flowing rhythm, and nice to read

    Michael :)

  • 2 months ago

    by Meena Krish

    Nicely penned with a timed rhythm and rhyme...sweet :)