Comments : Rebuilding the Walls...

  • 1 year ago

    by mossgirl19

    Ohh, what a heart-breaking write, one I hope is not you right now. Your rhyming is still great and it flowed so well that it stirred sadness in me as I read it.

  • 1 year ago

    by Michael

    Life can be cruel and tough, this resonates with myself.
    But make sure that wall, let's in some positive light
    Nice piece

    Michael :)

  • 1 year ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Matt what a heart wrenching piece. Rhyming and rhythm work really well