Ohh, what a heart-breaking write, one I hope is not you right now. Your rhyming is still great and it flowed so well that it stirred sadness in me as I read it.

Matt,
Life can be cruel and tough, this resonates with myself.
But make sure that wall, let's in some positive light
Nice piece

Michael :)

Matt what a heart wrenching piece. Rhyming and rhythm work really well