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by CJ Maleney Sep 6, 2017
Life, society /
An every day journey
With nothing special planned
The only way things differ
Is it's a different land
We travelled uneventfully
Just taking in the sights
Who would have guessed what was to come
On a bend off to the right
The wagon was the first thing seen
The car was by its side
I started stamping on the brakes
But still we did collide
The impact then the rising
Upon my drivers side
I never have in many years
Feared so for my life
I was the first to reach the car
Of alcohol it stunk
This never would have happened
If the driver wasn't drunk
by Meena Krish
So many times things like this happen yet
there are some who still never learn...good job
with the rhymes and its good to know that you
were safe...take care
by CJ Maleney
Thanks Meena I'm indestructible lol
Craig, well written, nicely rhymed. It's unfortunate that it had to happen in the first place. Thankfully you weren't seriously hurt.
Thanks Bren. Yeah but everything turned out ok. Well not for the army who will have had to buy a new truck.
Wow! fella a powerful piece of sadness, written in a wonderful story-like way of rhyme..
Thanks dude but it's not something that made or makes me sad, it's just something that happened.
You have told another life story well here, Craig... greatly rhymed as always. Thank God you came out with only a banged knee!
Thank you Mel
Long long time ago x
by Kitty Cat Lady
Crikey! That's a proper 'life flashing in front of your eyes' moment!
Great write x
It was nearly a new underpants moment lol