Comments : Piece of Heart

  • 10 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    I think a lot of people can relate to having been caught in such a spiders web. I liked this very much but (just a suggestion) the last line for me stuck a little. "you might havent any left" didnt feel as if it fitted quite as well. It might work better as "you dont have any left or mightn't have any left"? Milly x

    • 10 months ago

      by Guilty By Design

      Thanks! It didn't sit well with me either, I like the second one, "mightn't have any left"

  • 8 months ago

    by .k.u.s.h.q.u.e.e.n.c.j.

    I just read two other of your latest pieces, including this one and I must say.. you have a way with words many wish they acquired. This is a truth many endeavor unfortunately but you project your words with pictures which can be difficult to capture. Excellently written and very well worded, as always. take care.