Farewell

by Michael   Sep 24, 2017


shadows-silently gather in black,
an orchestra of cries; echoes weeping;
out of tune. Shoulders weighed;
with grief carrying a casket-
full of love-loss. Solicitude
wraps with sympathy
and hands pat a
gentle fare-
well

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  • 2 weeks ago

    by C J T

    Very strategically and beatifully written. Nothing short of a great write. 5/5

    • 2 weeks ago

      by Michael

      Thank you CJT :)

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Mark

    Double post Can't get this piece of art out of my mind. Brilliant

    • 3 weeks ago

      by Michael

      Thanks Mark, probably the best compliment one can receive :)

  • 3 weeks ago

    by Free verse

    Beautifully written and the heart structure just loved it.

    • 3 weeks ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Free Verse :)

  • 4 weeks ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Beautiful and heart shaped! x
    =^.^=

    • 4 weeks ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Kitty K x

  • 4 weeks ago

    by mossgirl19

    Very well said Michael and a lovely structure... It's a heart isn't it? Very unique.

    • 4 weeks ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss M
      Yes a sort of heart shape..:)

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