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by Michael Sep 24, 2017
Sadness, depression /
shadows-silently gather in black,
an orchestra of cries; echoes weeping;
out of tune. Shoulders weighed;
with grief carrying a casket-
full of love-loss. Solicitude
wraps with sympathy
and hands pat a
by Gwenyth Hill
This poem is so amazing and truly describes what a farewell is like. Great poem!
Really captures the heaviness of death. I like the kenning of 'love-loss'- a perceptive depiction of grief.
Thank you Alice for reading and commenting :)x
Very strategically and beatifully written. Nothing short of a great write. 5/5
Thank you CJT :)
Double post Can't get this piece of art out of my mind. Brilliant
Thanks Mark, probably the best compliment one can receive :)
Beautifully written and the heart structure just loved it.
Thank you Free Verse :)
by CJ Maleney