Comments : Red Roses (Acrostic)

  • 1 month ago

    by Mark

    This is a marvelous acrostic on red roses as a token of love and affection. I'm really taken back by this, wonderful vocabulary... You've captured this classic romantic notion ...all with such few words.

    • 1 month ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Marl and nice to read your comments, of how you put them across :)

  • 1 month ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Aw Michael ... and it's not even valentine's day! Lol
    I love how you've described love as a chain of physical reactions almost in response to the scent of a red rose ... I wonder if we've actually conditioned ourselves to have such a response to the scent?
    Love how something so deceptively simple as your poem is actually rather thought provoking! x
    =^.^=

    • 1 month ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Kitty K
      Just a few comments from other poets in how they feel makes it a joy to write this. I have written this from my feelings, and so nice to read the comments left, which is just emotionally inspiring, yours being part pf that :)x

  • 1 month ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Your use of language and delicate touch raises this acrostic far above the standard fare. Acrostics are too easy to just reel off without much thought other than to get that first letter of each line right; people are usually lazy when writing them which gives them their bad name. A good acrostic can be excellent and are never easy to execute. Yours are always excellent and never lazy. They are also always a pleasure to read.

    Take care, Michael.

    Ben

    • 1 month ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Ben,
      what you have written is a wonderful compliment :)

  • 1 month ago

    by Risqué

    I read this and feel like I've been carried away to a faraway beach... at night, with a dance floor, a little too much wine and someone wrapped around my arms.

    • 1 month ago

      by Michael

      Risqué
      what a lovely image :0
      and I'm pleased this happened x

  • 1 month ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Loved this sensual Acrostic. With vivid imagery my favourite In particular wad the endorphins seeking love. Milly x

    • 1 month ago

      by Michael

      Thank you Miss Milly
      Lovely comments :)x

  • 1 month ago

    by S s...

    Michael, very Beautifully you captured sensuality.

    • 1 month ago

      by Michael

      Thank you free verse :)

  • 4 weeks ago

    by mossgirl19

    I missed this beautiful acrostic. I will agree with Ben your acrostics are really well thought out. Take this one, this is amazing!

  • 4 weeks ago

    by deeplydesturbed

    :O i also missed this!!!
    I am so sorry!

    It is a stunning acrostic. Completely amazing.. I am favouriting.

    Well done.