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by CJ Maleney
Desire is a bugger at times especially if it's forbidden.
Thank you CJ! And it really is, wish I could've expressed it further but hey I haven't written poetry since I was a teenager :) Anyways thank you for your comment, I really appreciate your time ! :)
by Sinners gospel
There is nothing wrong in desiring something.
I loved this poem.
Thank you for your critique and your advice! and for your time ! :)
by Kitty Cat Lady
You're writing some really great poems Brise ... this one too!
"Ring heavy upon my hand" ... great description of how it feels to crave that forbidden lust. Great title again too! :-)
Thank you Kitty Cat Lady for taking your time to read my poems ! And I really appreciate your comment motivates me more :) Thank you !