Comments : Man of God

  • 7 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    I do not know if I have been clear in what I wanted to say and I apologize for using some quotations from the Bible for this piece, or even with the use of God in the title. This is inspired by a true to life experience which has left me with a failing faith. This is not in any way intended for other purposes except for me to express my true sentiments as of the moment.

  • 7 months ago

    by ddavidd

    You do not have to apologize for how you feel dear Liz This is truly a great write

  • 7 months ago

    by Ren

    I am in tears after reading this. My dear sweet beautiful Lady, what an intense and heart-wrenching write. It makes my stomach churn and my chest shudder. So very well written, though, and just teeming with emotion. I don't know the story or reason behind writing this, but I am sending much love to you, Mel, always <3

  • 7 months ago

    by Ben

    Added to favs for sure.

    I thought that this was a very brave write and not in the way that some may thinnk in using bible references etc but more for writing your own truth....for finding it....I don't want to speak out of turn so I will leave it there, however never consider aspects of this as failure.....ever xx

    Ben x

  • 7 months ago

    by Milo

    Oh boy... Where to begin, what do I say I do not know.

  • 7 months ago

    by Fredy

    I've been gone for a while and every time I thought about poetry... I've thought about your work... how you combine simplicity with an absolute deep message! Great work!

  • 6 months ago

    by Em

    Oh my goodness. I am speechless and apologies for missing this gem

  • 6 months ago

    by CJ Maleney

    Hey Mel.

    Just seen this one, absolutely amazing

    Craig x

  • 6 months ago

    by Brenda

    Lady Mel, I am sorry I missed this. Tbis is such a powerful write. Blown away with the content. Well done-