Comments : Holidays are here

  • 5 months ago

    by Milly Hayward

    Nice upbeat rhyming piece. You must be living in a warm place lol We have fluffy pyjamas, heating on full, heated blankets and throws :) Cleverly rhymed all the way through. Best wishes Milly x

  • 5 months ago

    by Em

    Very feisty lol :) fabulously rhymed too xx

  • 5 months ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Goodness, Naomi, sounds like my kind of holiday, lol.
    Great, festive acrostic, but like Milly points out, not quite what us English are used to...

    Take care,

    Ben

  • 5 months ago

    by Brenda

    Wow Nams! That's quite cheeky, lol. While we are freezing out butts off you are shedding your clothes-enjoy your summer!

    • 5 months ago

      by deeplydesturbed

      Thanks Brenda!!! I have 2 weeks of no work!! Yay!

  • 5 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Wow...oh my...love this, Nams! Ah, it seems you are going to enjoy your holidays! Nicely stringed acrostic, a wonderful read.

  • 5 months ago

    by Kitty Cat Lady

    Ah Nams, you've depicted that joyous 'holiday' feeling so well here ... you sound light and free and it's making me a bit jealous! Lol. Enjoy! :-) x
    =^.^=